by Masago: Rengay #33 (Apr 13-19, 2008), Verses 1-4 (of 6)
Foot traffic — a dandelion sprout / in a tiny crack.
These new shoes — my feet / sue for a prompt return.
Passing car — a bit of her dress caught / in the door.
A large man / squeezes in between us — long bus ride.
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4 comments:
glad I'm not on the bus! :)
oh!!!
john
i hate rides in a crowded bus!
Andrew: :-)
John: :-)
Polona: Me too.
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