2008-04-16

Rengay Through the Seasons #33 [1-4]

by Masago: Rengay #33 (Apr 13-19, 2008), Verses 1-4 (of 6)

Foot traffic — a dandelion sprout / in a tiny crack.
These new shoes — my feet / sue for a prompt return.
Passing car — a bit of her dress caught / in the door.
A large man / squeezes in between us — long bus ride.


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4 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

glad I'm not on the bus! :)

John McDonald said...

oh!!!
john

polona said...

i hate rides in a crowded bus!

Masago said...

Andrew: :-)

John: :-)

Polona: Me too.