by Masago: Rengay #34 (Apr 20-26, 2008), Verses 1-6 (of 6)
Glacier in the lake — a splash is seen, before / it is heard.
A breaking-up rumour started — we just now find out.
A tulip petal / falls to the floor — the baby / has a taste.
Dark chocolate / between the lips — she bites / a little chunk.
He releases the bowling ball... the left pin wobbles, falls.
A wet cardboard box — one kick almost sends a piece / across the puddle.
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3 comments:
a nice kick (or should i say break) to end the series :)
Breaking apart and expectations. The subtle touch of humor in the last verse was a perfect ending. Another great series.
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