2008-11-01
Renhai Reflections 35: Sounding
Sounding
A Renhai by Trish Shields (ts)* & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Written October 22 to 29, 2008
A small crab / races across mudflats — autumn squall. /ts
Honeymoon cruise ship stroll — /vs a kiss on his red cheek. /ts
Its barnacled snout / breaks the calm surface — gushing blowhole. /vs
*Trish lives on Vancouver Island, in British Colombia, Canada.
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8 comments:
the 2 of you put this together so well!
with due apologies:
a small crab
trips on mudflats
broken shell?
i begin to enjoy renhai more...even without the links given..
but then i may be missing something..so rules please, Masago...:-)
wishes!
devika
Lovely seabased writing here.
I love the link between the kiss and the blowhole - or at least thats a link I draw. And that little crab, I want to follow him.
Sounding, yes! A lot of s's in it!:)
great imagery in this one.
well done both!
I wanted to give you some applause.. ****** hear it?
(:
I enjoyed this one so very much.
Thank you all very much, on behalf of Trish and me.
Gautami: Cute!
Devika: Hopefully today's post will help. :-)
Borut: Well-observed... I hadn't seen that (it certainly wasn't intentional).
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