2009-06-02
Renhai Reflections 111: Us and Them
Us and Them
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)
Bars all around —
on the bare, worn branches,
my family. /zh.r
The crowd grows larger — /vs
a redhead mimics me. /zh.r
I swing by tail...
one after another,
flashes of light. /vs
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9 comments:
'Us' not far behind 'them'...or, rather ahead of them! :)
enjoyable, Masago and Zhanna :)
wishes,
devika
I love that middle verse! Well done you two.
enjoyed
john
enjoyed this renhai the Li 1 of Verse 3 'i swing by tail' was a perfect clue for the theme
much love
gillena
Good one.
I like the entry very much: bar and bare ... Good one.
Best wishes
Ralf
very nice.
This feels quite sad to me.
When I read the first one, the image I got was of someone drawing their family tree, and having lots of 'bare branches' without names of relatives. No sure how I got that, but thought I'd share.
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