2006-07-04

709. Post Repast

a bamboo toothpick
between thumb and a finger
after-dinner chat

[This unintentionally turned out to have a 5-7-5 syllable format]

6 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

nice

floots said...

nice picture
(i often use 5-7-5 out of habit after years of using it as a part of teaching 11 year olds about syllables and scansion etc)

polona said...

very nice. 5-7-5 can work well if not forced...

Masago said...

j: Thanks.

floots: Thanks. Yes, once-in-awhile I write a 5-7-5 without intention. I look forward to reading some of yours on your blog. :-)

polona: Thanks, I agree. I may have written more of them as I'm not always counting syllables to notice. :-)

Pat Paulk said...

Well captured Vaughn! 5-7-5 or not!

Masago said...

pat: Thanks mucho, my friend!