Very intense, Vaughn. There's a saintly parade of darkly thrust emotions imbedded in this piece that lend themselves to the thrust of thorny sting beneath one's palm. Ouch!
From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
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Don't shake hands!
Very intense, Vaughn. There's a saintly parade of darkly thrust emotions imbedded in this piece that lend themselves to the thrust of thorny sting beneath one's palm. Ouch!
that one would scare me off... another goodie, vaughn!
pat: I sort of did, and that is how I discovered the nest as I was suddenly surrounded by an angry swarm. Luckily I did not get stung.
dustin: thank you!
nick: You've descended the deeper depths of this image. Thanks.
polona: I did get a bit of a start. Thanks.
left hand heard
nothing about
war
tikkis: very true...had I passed by the left-hand side this haiku would likely not have been written.
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