a maple seed
twirls down...the dog
nearly catches it
About Masago
- Masago
- Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
- From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
My Blog List
-
-
-
Ice Can Look Nice4 years ago
-
A Dream, A Prayer8 years ago
-
-
-
6 Hantu yang Muncul di Toilet11 years ago
-
distant thunder12 years ago
-
welcome spring14 years ago
9 comments:
a maple seed
twirls down...the dog
nearly catches it
Link with 874: Egg / Seed.
[Dogs are known to try and eat just about anything. The more disgusting the better. Sometimes they will also try and catch odd things moving around them. Cats, especially kittens, do this too but they seldom fail to miss their mark.]
"nearly" - perfect!!
I try to catch them, too.
Ours fall in early summer
nice one again
john
dog nearly misses it!
Nearly caught before life can begin. Excellently penned!!
"nearly" makes this haiku work.
good one!
Dog drove off
the cheeky cat --
the seed was saved!?
Aurora: Thank you.
Andrew: Thanks.
Pamela: :-) They fall here early too, but sometimes there are stragglers.
John: Thanks!
Gautami: :-)
Pat: Yes, a narrow escape.
Polona: Thank you muchly.
Tikkis: A plausible explanation. :-)
Post a Comment