2006-08-05

739. Overhead

summer sky...
the jet flies ahead
of its sound

6 comments:

Aurora said...

I love this one. I'd take out "above" simply because it's implication means it's not needed. Well written, Vaughn!

Masago said...

aurora: Thank you. And I have taken your advice.

polona said...

good one!
(i took a pic today that would fit this haiku perfectly... don't think i'll post it , though)

Masago said...

Thanks polona (I took a picture awhile back along these these lines too).

Pat Paulk said...

Looking toward the sound is too late. Excellent!!

Masago said...

pat: Thanks!