2006-08-09

745. Gastronomic Tanka

thai dinner —
every bite tasty
except a mushroom,
that falls off my fork
and down into my lap

8 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

Very good tanka --- do more! :)

Pat Paulk said...

The tree is sprouting wings!! Excellent!!

polona said...

now why did that mushroom fall... :)
nice!

texas haijin said...

v,

you want to collaborate on a rengay? you and me. via e-mail. i would enjoy that. you got time?

Masago said...

andrew: I have written only a dozen or so. I usually write them when I can't pack the experience into a haiku...we'll see. Thanks for the encouragement.

pat: Thanks pat.

polona: It was slippery (allright...I'm sloppy, okay?)... Thanks :-)

dustin: Sure, I'll connect with you via email with details.

floots said...

all too familiar to me
(especially if i've dressed up nicely)
cheers

Bill said...

I thought I was the only one who had trouble with malevolent mushrooms.

Masago said...

floots: LOL.

bill: Them little beggars are slippery, eh?