under the bridge...
a pigeon feather twirls
to the ground
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About Masago
- Masago
- Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
- From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
My Blog List
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Ice Can Look Nice4 years ago
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A Dream, A Prayer8 years ago
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6 Hantu yang Muncul di Toilet11 years ago
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distant thunder12 years ago
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welcome spring14 years ago
8 comments:
Does it fall as fast as a stone? Does it land as hard? I don't know what that means, but it made me think. Love it!!
This haiku is as soft and delicate as the image it portrays Masago. Thank you.
PS: Can't log in to your comments page with my beta Blogger account (darn), so I am logging in here as "other". Alas, my picture will not grace your comments page. ;-)
frailty
wanderlust
happenstance
all hidden in a few words
nice one
lovely, delicate image!
Do pigeon feathers have pigeons? Great moment.
Pat: Ah, deep questions...glad to have spurred the ponder. Thanks.
Karasu: Thank you for your kind words. Hopefully the beta thing will be ironed-out soon.
Floots: Thanks, you've verbalized its character and identified aspects I hadn't considered.
Polona: Thank you.
Bill: Interesting thought. Thanks.
Tim: Thank you, mate!
Ssnneeeeeze!
Just allergy,
or Bird flu?
Tikkus: Hmmm...good question!
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